| Reviews for The Thin Line |
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   Jay827 chapter 4 . 12/31/2007 e. new chapter! yay. update soon? Happy New Year! |
| people.are.strange chapter 4 . 12/31/2007 It is sweet how Tristan only has eyes for Marina now. Hah I yearn for more. More, more more ! |
| Jayn chapter 4 . 12/30/2007 Heh heh... He's feelings are becoming more obvious. Maybe he'll figure what to do (or not to do) and she like him more back. _ |
| intially loaded chapter 4 . 12/30/2007 yay you updated. it gets better and better. |
| Riley Hunter chapter 4 . 12/30/2007 another wonderful chapter! And, i know how you feel. I got 11 freaking reviews on my first chatper! I was ECSTATIC! Well, any way, excelent chapter. And, although this is totally off subject, have you read Twilight by Stephenie Meyer? It is so good. I certainly hope you have because that book is almost to die for. AND it's about vampires! And werewolfs! And a girl named Bella who falls in love with a vampire named Edward! |
| Diamandis chapter 4 . 12/30/2007 Aw, I love this story, its so romantic and they haven't even kissed yet lol. But the things he says about her are SO sweet. Update soon! |
| atreyu love chapter 4 . 12/30/2007 i love it! updating weekly? YEAHH. thanks so much! I love Marina and Tristan's relationship, and how its going :) and it was really cute when she jumped into his arms! PLEASE UPDATE! |
| Nicole Deming chapter 4 . 12/30/2007 Omgoodness I think I like this story just as much as Our Room. It is awesome. Update soon. |
| fantasy4luvr chapter 3 . 12/28/2007 update soon pls |
| Undecided.And.Confused chapter 3 . 12/28/2007 Wait, so how is her family faring with her disappearance? Doesn't she miss them? I wonder what the main focus of the story is! They're not just going to stay in the bedroom and pretend they don't like each other! But wait! That other guy from the first chapter! Where art thou? Can'T wait for more! |
| Undecided.And.Confused chapter 2 . 12/28/2007 AW! Their hateful words are meant only for the wind! Huh, well he told her to get lost, so she did. Go figure, arrogant vamp! |
| Undecided.And.Confused chapter 1 . 12/28/2007 I'm going to cry with happiness. Is it completely weird if my name is Marina? And I'm 16? Of course I don't look like you described her... Ahr! Its so weird that the name keeps popping up and I keep giggling like a moron! Oh lordie! It's the first story I found that has my name and I actually want to read it! Go Marina! PS: I like the idea of the story so far! |
| Naomi chapter 3 . 12/23/2007 Wow, I'm soo into this story. Please update soon~. :D |
| Valkyre chapter 3 . 12/23/2007 cool |
| FM Radio chapter 3 . 12/22/2007 Instead of "Understand me?" your should have said "Clear?" Or instead of her saying just "Crystal." She should have said "Clear as crystal." or something like that. |