Reviews for The Thin Line
Jay827 chapter 3 . 12/22/2007
e. new chapter! yay. he loves her. hmm. too bad he can't read her mine. that sucks. update when possible.
MeLove chapter 3 . 12/22/2007
Not too fast...but almost...if that makes since. I normally don't go for the vampire stories...but i'm really enjoying this one!
Riley Hunter chapter 3 . 12/22/2007
Once again, another lovely chapter. And as much as I hate to agree, you ARE going a tad fast. But, I still can't wait till the next chapter!
people.are.strange chapter 3 . 12/22/2007
I don't have much of a comment on this chapter just glad you posted before Christmas. Happy Holidays !
Jayn chapter 3 . 12/22/2007
Pretty interesting and kinda cute. _ Please update!
blondiexoxo chapter 1 . 12/22/2007
i like this story alot so far

hope u update soon
Diamandis chapter 3 . 12/22/2007
Another great chapter. There relationship is so sweet, I love where its going. Update soon!
sousie chapter 3 . 12/22/2007
update
Pot chapter 3 . 12/22/2007
First of all, I absolutely loved it. Second, it's "from navel to nose" not "neck to navel" xD
mia5081 chapter 3 . 12/22/2007
Ooh I like the story so far! Yeah, I understand how vampires don't really ponder things exactly-if they did, they could be pondering for centuries lol.

The only thing I have to mention, is that you don't need the "Flashback/ End Flashback" as it distracts the reader from the story, and in your A/N at the top of the chapter you did say how the flashback is in italics.

Update soon!

~Mia
FallenAngelFromTheSky chapter 3 . 12/22/2007
yeah! you updated! i love the chapter, update soon. you probably hear that a lot but, by god it's the truth!
atreyu love chapter 3 . 12/22/2007
so for a vampire, is it that you can

hear any mortals thoughts EXCEPT your mates

unless you mate with them? hm.

This is really interesting :)

PLEASE UPDATE!
Nicole Deming chapter 3 . 12/22/2007
Tristan Is too cute. I think this story is going really good the way it is.
Bitterly.Me chapter 2 . 12/21/2007
I'm liking it already! I've loved Our Room, and i bet this story will be as great as that one!

By any chance, have you ever read Twilight by Stephenie Meyer? This story reminds me of that book for some reason. Also, you have a pic of Henry Cavill for Tristan, like Edward in Twilight...

Or maybe it's a really big coincidence...

Oh well, but I LUV your name choices. Tristan... That sounds so HOT!

Much Luv,

-BrownEyedGrl123 :o)
FM Radio chapter 2 . 12/21/2007
AW! I'll go review as many chapter of Our room as possible!
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