No offense, but I am a vampire freak so I LOVE THIs, I like it better than Our Room, which was awesome, but this is like...*imitates angels singing* Yeah! Onward to the next chappy!

you asked me to review, so i am. hehehe...anyway, loved your writing, always have. update soon please!

Cute. I like it so far. Although, Tristan comes off rather as caring and, sometimes, overbaring, than arrogant.

Also, I found your story pretty amusing. Marina makes for a good laugh. Anyways, hope you'll update soon.

So far I love this story! Tristan is by far the SMEXIEST vampire I've seen! LOL

Hmm, interesting idea. I like it so far. Am I wrong by guessing that you're a fan of the series Twilight by Stephenie Meyer?

OMG.

UPDATE!

hes getting attached!

Our Room and The Thin Line is one of the BEST stories I've ever read in my life! I swear! You're such a good writer! Need to update soon! Oh, I can't wait for the sequel to Our Room! AWESOME STORY!

aw i love ur story hope u update soon!

I was expecting her to get harmed by the vampire, but something told me that Tristan would arrive in the nick of time. And have I told you how much I love the name Tristan ? It sounds like the name of a sexy man. Hah probably due to the movie 'Tristan Isolde'. I love James Franco.

yay

new chapter! update when possible.

Ahh! **claps** I love Tristan! He's so sweet too . I don't care if he's a vampire, he just makes me wanna hug him! I'm really not liking this Ludivine right now. Sounds icky. On the other hand, Chrisina doesn't sound so bad. By the way, cool names :) And Marina's character is pretty cool :D I'm totally loving this, so update soon!

Kisses,

midnightbeauty

Well, well, Haley as a mini Belle. Sounds good. Excellent chapter, and I am really starting to like Tristan. Originally I was iffy because I positively despise all Tristans that I know, but this Tristan is actually alright. GOOD CHAPTER AND GOOD STORY!

Aw! How sweet! Tristan can be a bastard, and then he can be so sweet! I'm confused... he told her to get lost while he fed and then when she did that he got mad because another vampire tried to kill her. Update soon! ;D

I like it but the dialoge doesn't really seem to flow and everything moves really fast. It's a good plot though.

A.

I really like your story. It's great! I needed a new vamp story to read. ALthouhg its kinda weird reading about a girl who has the same name as me. lol