Reviews for The Thin Line |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like this. cant wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, the things he says to her are SO sweet. I want them to get married and have lots of babies :P I love these types of fics and you updated REALLY quickly, keep it up lol. Btw I love that song you have as the chapter, Paramore rock lol. I also love how he would die if she does, really romantic. UPDATE SOON! xx P.S - Tristan is Hott! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mmhm I actually liked this chapter (not anything against you, but I'm not one for much vampire fics). I actually can't wait for more. Hah. Should be mighty interesting what occurs next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...I can tell that I'm going to love this story. I love all your stories and this is no exception. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the part where you wrote that when you die you see your mate. So when Marina dies does she see Tristan? Anyway, I like where your going with the story and I'll add it to my story alert list. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like it |
![]() ![]() Wow! Amazing. Im so happy your writting about vampires. They're my favorite! You are seriously the best writter. If you get a chance you should check out my story called Slave, Maid or Lover? Under the screen name greendayfan07. Cant wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seems like a great beginning to a story. I loved your last story "Our Room" and I know you're a great writer so I have no doubt that this will be an amazing story, too. Can't wait for the next chapter! ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay. i like it. vampires. i love stories about them. and their soulmates. update when possible. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh! I love it . So cute :D Definitely update soon. And update Our Room! Kisses, midnightbeauty |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds like the beginning of another good story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story I hope you update soon. I just love vampire love stories. |