i really liked the plot line although in the begining in was quite similar to twilight.

charlotte

i absolutely love this story! i feel in love with it after reading the first chapter! personally, i think this is better than twilight! u should really think about publishing it ... it captivated me from the first chapter, the characters are amazing ! LOVE IT !

love this freaking story!

it's amazing!

btw if anyone says its like twilight its not

its so different!

luved all of it!

I loved this I couldn't stop reading! I'm so excited to read the sequel! Tristan, sounds amazing. I wish I had a Tristan!

i thought she couldent have children

its good...i like the way the the story starts without background information about the characters...it forces you to have to get to know them

wonderul. another story you made me fall in love with. lets see if your other stories can do the same. i wonder...

alright.. so i'm here to add a little perspective to your reviews..

to be honest, I think you are getting way too much praise for this story. The writing is just awful and the characters have no depth whatsoever. Did this girl not have any past before this dude just grabbed her? I mean really, how likely is it that you get the shit knocked out of you, and you wake up and argue about being called stupid by the guy who kidnapped you? Wouldn't you just want to get the hell out of here? You ever hear the quote, "The difference between fiction and reality? Fiction has to make sense."

Not only is she a sixteen year old drama queen but the way you've portrayed one.. she seems to be a dumb one at that.

Also, you barely offer any depth to the actual story. All you read is cliche dialogue that I could probably find from cheesy romance movies. I have yet to see a hint of a plot besides the shallow attraction between tristan and marina.

I'm sorry, but I couldn't even bring myself to read past this chapter... this story could use some definite work. And I think any sane person would agree with me.

awesome

loved it!

definatly like your story however there are blank spaces in your story were you don't qite finish what happend plus the gal that is mate with the vampire doesn't seem very real if i met a vampire i wouldn't be oh goody i would be like holly crap get the hell away from me sort of thing so make the girl main charicter be more like a real person but yes i do like this sotry

HeHe I'm so happy that she is pregnant and that they are both so happy i think her power is so funny that she actually is the saying she's got them rapped around her finger

heii

i really like all ur storys ur a great wirte

the only bad part is u get really in2 it with the sex seens

lol

anyway good story and i also like walk the line and our room

fab work

“This girl has had some effect on you. You used to be so arrogant, conceited. Now you actually think of someone else.” James said, slightly amazed.

“I had to grow up sometime. It takes humans eighteen years, and it took me 200. I’m just a bit behind schedule.” -

“Oh believe me, I’ll deliver!”

Tristan Aldridge never backed down from a challenge.-

lmaO! loved the story so far D

LOVE THIS CHAPTER...and I found the sequel before I found the original...but before I go and read the sequel i had to read this one first...can't wait to read the sequel...