Reviews for Out of Focus |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aw this is a really sweet piece of writing. I actually really want to do this - but I'd probably fall off the roof and break my neck and that wouldn't be much fun... but still alcohol and a roof... hmm I think they could mix well together. I can see this either way - there could be love interest there or they could just be best friends. It works both ways, and I really like it - that's how friendship should be. Anyway I'm going to go figure out a way to get onto my roof... It's just really high... hm Annie |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know...I got more of the really close friends vibe. But whatever it was, I really loved the description with this story. You did an awesome job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This seems like a story with really no plot line, but its really good all the same... I can't explain it... But i really like it, you got both the people down perfectly. Very impressive |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story! It's pretty awesome. Interesting views are put into it as well, like the insignificance of something compared to the larger and greater things. Great job with this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet I reckon he likes her because of the pause at the end... But it could just be me... HAve you actually snuck onto someone's roof? |