Reviews for Out of Focus
Annie Jane chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
Aw this is a really sweet piece of writing.

I actually really want to do this - but I'd probably fall off the roof and break my neck and that wouldn't be much fun...

but still alcohol and a roof... hmm I think they could mix well together.

I can see this either way - there could be love interest there or they could just be best friends. It works both ways, and I really like it - that's how friendship should be.

Anyway I'm going to go figure out a way to get onto my roof... It's just really high... hm

blurrylights chapter 1 . 11/25/2008
I don't know...I got more of the really close friends vibe. But whatever it was, I really loved the description with this story. You did an awesome job!
Billie.Joelle chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
This seems like a story with really no plot line, but its really good all the same... I can't explain it... But i really like it, you got both the people down perfectly. Very impressive
wecouldgoandget40s chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
Cool story! It's pretty awesome. Interesting views are put into it as well, like the insignificance of something compared to the larger and greater things. Great job with this!
HollowxPromises chapter 1 . 12/14/2007

I reckon he likes her because of the pause at the end... But it could just be me...

HAve you actually snuck onto someone's roof?