Reviews for Something New
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
This is so interesting. Trying t grow up but also being scared, trying to escape, but knowing where to start. Wanting to run away but not knowing where to go. Wanting to take the leap but being afraid to fall. The other person sounds like they want to help, with comfort and sweet words, but you're old enough to know better and strike out on your own. Great job.
Isca chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
"I want out of this innocence and into reality." Wow. That definitely expresses a child's desire to be an adult. "We won't even notice when this all disappears." Such sorrow! "I'm planning to escape." I liked that twist at the end! :)
Doc Blood chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
This gets stronger/better in the last 10 lines. Was that the part you wrote first or tweaked later? It may well be best that way as it makes the character seem to grow. Good work.

Peace, Doc