Reviews for The Seceret Amulets: Book one
Jessie Timmer chapter 1 . 12/25/2007
Very rough and a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes. But not bad.

Try slowing down the pace quite a bit. It's too choppy and it jumps around a ton. I have problems with this too so don't sweat it.

It's a good piece for a beginning writer!
makko chapter 2 . 12/16/2007
hi hih This is Makko
makko chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
I LOVED it! It was so cool. I would love for my life to be like that. MAKKO MAKKO. This is your friend MAKKO. You already know that though. It really was a good story.


-Your best friend in the whole wide world.

-And don't you forget it, Fool! I pity the fool!