Reviews for Angel
Kelly chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
I was so anxious reading this! You are really good at writing action, it flows and connects and the imagery really makes it all fit together. Cool character as well.
N.J Robinson chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
This is cool. Though I expected her to sprout wings when she jumped out of the window, because that would be totally awesome. Regardless, I like the character a lot. And her "special gifts" are cool, though I'm still confused about what she is. Is she an angel? I might be a little dense, but I didn't get the feel that she really is an Angel - if that's what she is. I just understood that she is a thief, has super accurate aim, and really cool powers. Maybe you could explore her origins a little more, just to make things a little bit clearer. Other than that I thought the story was cool and kept my interest the entire time. Awesome Job, keep it up.