Reviews for trent, tori and being content to lust
felicia13 chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
I like this, but I feel like it's two poems. The first stanza seems very seperate from the second and third. *shrugs* It's not like it matters too much, but... I don't follow.

I like "from a lavender man to a girl

with honey in her hair." It's quite lovely. And colorific.

Good work.

setne chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
When I spotted the title, it drew me immediately. I'm very glad I read this poem, as it is a beautiful piece of work. The imagery is keen, visually wonderful. The entire poem is, as it already says in the final line, intoxicating. Well done, very well done.
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 12/15/2007
this was beautiful...

but makes me feel bad.

i just wrote a poem about my mother,

thinking of the lavender i was to give her

and wrote about my fear of her death...

i used similar comparisons, looked in the just in column

mouth gapping. oops. promise i didn't steal your idea.

and don't worry; it's not identical.

look at it if you don't believe me.

it's called lavender pieces.

i thought of it while performing tonight.

okay, well this poem was lovely.


imagery wonderful.

good work. )
gg. lass chapter 1 . 12/15/2007
i especially like the last two stanzas.

great job!

this is a fav for sure.

yours until the wind changes,