|Reviews for trent, tori and being content to lust|
| felicia13 chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
I like this, but I feel like it's two poems. The first stanza seems very seperate from the second and third. *shrugs* It's not like it matters too much, but... I don't follow.
I like "from a lavender man to a girl
with honey in her hair." It's quite lovely. And colorific.
| setne chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
When I spotted the title, it drew me immediately. I'm very glad I read this poem, as it is a beautiful piece of work. The imagery is keen, visually wonderful. The entire poem is, as it already says in the final line, intoxicating. Well done, very well done.
| smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 12/15/2007
this was beautiful...
but makes me feel bad.
i just wrote a poem about my mother,
thinking of the lavender i was to give her
and wrote about my fear of her death...
i used similar comparisons, looked in the just in column
mouth gapping. oops. promise i didn't steal your idea.
and don't worry; it's not identical.
look at it if you don't believe me.
it's called lavender pieces.
i thought of it while performing tonight.
okay, well this poem was lovely.
good work. )
| gg. lass chapter 1 . 12/15/2007
i especially like the last two stanzas.
this is a fav for sure.
yours until the wind changes,