Reviews for lavender pieces
underrose chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
It's beautiful. The similes and metaphors are AMAZINGLY DONE. I swear, I'm adding you to my favourite authors list.
Rae Michelle chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
Beautiful piece; lots of emotion.

shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
I liked it however , in my opinion, (maybye just cause I'm weird, idk) but I think that sometimes you end up writinig a lot of words that just take away from your piece, like your adding too many unnessecary words. I loved the line "as a thread of darkness wraps your heart" *oh shivers* pretty nice work though. ~S.S.
lymli chapter 1 . 12/21/2007
it's a heartfelt poem, sad by the way, I like the similes.
Fan Fan chapter 1 . 12/15/2007
oh oh oh! Elaborate more on the "attraction is like sugar"! It's got so much potential as a metaphor! *grins* A beautiful composition of the ending image. keep writing :)