Reviews for Cradled In Peace
gillkjblhkfjfhbk chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
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lost-balloon chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
I love choka's in school we studied them for two years and learned how to read them in chines ahh there beautiful i recommend them.
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
it's very sweet and thanks for showing me a new format. choka i'll have to remember that. Is it something from Austrilia bc i've never heard of it here in the US.
irish-ileana chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
Thank you.
Yeshua chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
Awesome poem, do you practice? It was nice, and cute.
Artemis Reborn chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
This is so sweet and tender. I liked "to hold and kiss your heart". I thought that was such a unique way to express how much you care and worship this person, and wish to care for them. It's truly beautiful.

Art.
the Stranger in the moonlight chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
Aw.. this was sweet and lonely feeling. But the hope in the final line makes it all ok. Nicely done one of your best I dare say.

Jackie
Autumn Reflections chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
Very beautiful and it gives the greatest of feelings.
Maggot Blood chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
I like this Choka alot better then anything else in that style, brings out more meaning and thought. Great work.

Maggot.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
Very peaceful and serene. Flows well with the sincerity. Good write. MD:77.
Blissfully Sarcastic chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
How you use so little a piece to get across so big a message is beyond me.

And how you used a love poem such as this without sounding clich├ęd...My goodness!

The flow is pretty amazing, too, as is the word choice.

(I'm envious now.)
loversdream17 chapter 1 . 12/23/2007
great job girl. I really loved the ending. Keep up the good work.

Mandi4life
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 12/21/2007
Beautiful poem. I really liked it. Was very peaceful and well written.

Good job!

QueenVixta
Michael l'oeil fol chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
Thanks for the review...usually i prefer rhyme...but i do like this...your line breaks are interesting. Where to chokas come from? ive never seen the style before...until our paths cross again

Michael
subliminalsquirrel chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
nice spacing from 3rd to 4th line

good work!
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