Cheesy enough this whole time the Guy in love with girl hahaha...beautiful love..but I don't get it the way he spoke...kinda of rude..

This was good, but confusing.

ngl, this story is slightly ridiculous haha
i mean i guess its supposed to be cute, but his deep philosophical musings are so laughable, and the story is so rushed. how did she fall in love with him after like 2 interactions? it's just not very realistic...

I'm usually a fan of your writing, but this one just fell flat

I like this :D

Hey! Sorry it took me so long to read this. I got sidetracked with stuff in school. Everything's just been really shitty lately and I wanted some fluff so I came to you. :)

I noticed that your writing in the beginning was kind of...off? I'm not sure how to say this but it just isn't as clear as your writing at the end. It was extremely cliche, with how imperfect Jenna was and how perfect Liam seemed to be. I know that if you expand on this, which you should, we'd discover how imperfect Liam really is but I feel as though you should've incorporated some of his flaws into the story. I'm so glad your reason as to why Jenna wore a brace isn't completely irrelevant and actually made sense.

I found a few grammatical errors, at least I think they're errors. It's really nothing big.

Good job once again.

With love,
my princess ending

Such a cute story! I loved it :)

evidently I'm reading all of your stories today...this is cute! I like your back-and-forth writing style, how all the guys are hot and cold and then passionate. I always want them to kiss right away and then you drag it on foreverrrr and its torture. good job(:
(also, sorry not sorry for stalking your writing)
(:

6 years! Wow! He really should have said something! Well, he did, in the end. But he put her through so much emotional suffering that it's not funny. And he suffered, too. I'm just glad he did something in the end! :)

i LOVED it :) awesum AWWWWWWW 3333

:))

this was great ;)

HaHa i literally started laughing at the part about Bryan leaving because of the vulgarity of the scene...

awww this is quite nice. :) it's a very INTENSE one-shot. really enjoyed it

Aww.. so cliché yet delightfully loverly )

quite enjoyed that~!

xX QQ

Love it.