Reviews for Empty Stairwells
Sorry chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
ngl, this story is slightly ridiculous haha
i mean i guess its supposed to be cute, but his deep philosophical musings are so laughable, and the story is so rushed. how did she fall in love with him after like 2 interactions? it's just not very realistic...

I'm usually a fan of your writing, but this one just fell flat
bubublacz chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
I like this :D
my princess ending chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
Hey! Sorry it took me so long to read this. I got sidetracked with stuff in school. Everything's just been really shitty lately and I wanted some fluff so I came to you. :)

I noticed that your writing in the beginning was kind of...off? I'm not sure how to say this but it just isn't as clear as your writing at the end. It was extremely cliche, with how imperfect Jenna was and how perfect Liam seemed to be. I know that if you expand on this, which you should, we'd discover how imperfect Liam really is but I feel as though you should've incorporated some of his flaws into the story. I'm so glad your reason as to why Jenna wore a brace isn't completely irrelevant and actually made sense.

I found a few grammatical errors, at least I think they're errors. It's really nothing big.

Good job once again.

With love,
my princess ending
APassionForReadingAndWriting chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
Such a cute story! I loved it :)
Brielle Gemson chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
evidently I'm reading all of your stories today...this is cute! I like your back-and-forth writing style, how all the guys are hot and cold and then passionate. I always want them to kiss right away and then you drag it on foreverrrr and its torture. good job(:
(also, sorry not sorry for stalking your writing)
(:
Montara chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
6 years! Wow! He really should have said something! Well, he did, in the end. But he put her through so much emotional suffering that it's not funny. And he suffered, too. I'm just glad he did something in the end! :)
heal me forever chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
i LOVED it :) awesum AWWWWWWW 3333
twibbit chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
:))
theKnobblyKneedWriter chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
this was great ;)
ClaryLovesYouXD chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
HaHa i literally started laughing at the part about Bryan leaving because of the vulgarity of the scene...
The Imagination Addict chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
awww this is quite nice. :) it's a very INTENSE one-shot. really enjoyed it
cerebral chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
Aww.. so cliché yet delightfully loverly )

quite enjoyed that!

xX QQ
fariswheel chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Love it.
Sincerely Kalie chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
If only we all had our own Liam Mansers. -sigh-

This was pretty amazing, though!
natmarie chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Stumbled upon this. Super cute. Well written and developed characters. Almost wish there was a sequel of sorts to see how these two progress in their relationship. But fine as it is too :O) I'm just greedy.
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