Reviews for Because of You |
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![]() ![]() wow...that was sweet.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE WRITE .INTO A STORY |
![]() ![]() ![]() CUTE oneshot! You should so totally make like a sequel! He didn't OFFICIALLY break up with Alex, so you can go from there. :) ~Ronnie~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() You were right; it was vague and there wasn't much going on. But I enjoyed it. If you ever find yourself working on it again, I'll be on the lookout. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was quite weird and heart breaking til the end. And it was quite vague. I kinda wish I knew more about Brian and Alex. Or the relationship between Alex and Ange. But overall it was good. And I just realized that I've read a lot of your stories, more from your alternate account. I did like his confession at the end. And I like how he really cared for her and noticed all the times she wasn't there. Love the story! ~*~Ngoc1231~*~ |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aw.. That's so cute. A definite tear-jerker. I'm speechless. Hands down!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() SO CHEESY! I LOVE IT D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you did a great job with this oneshot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you're really good at making cliches original, if that makes any sense. falling in love with someone who heals you-that's typical, but loving more than one someone and their little character quirks-that's what makes this unique. in other words, this story is awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this. its kinda vague but i understand it. u should add more to it instead of it being a one shot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's not vague. I understood it. I Loved It! Of course you being an excellent writer certainly helps. I was smiling after I read this too. So now, you've made me smile twice. Thanks again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW eighty years kinda big |
![]() ![]() yea..it started off quite vague, but then as i read along, i developed really nicely |