|Reviews for body language|
| Craven chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
i dig it. i'd recommend a semicolon instead of a comma though.
| Sylvia Woolf chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
This is PERFECT. I haven't read a haiku that actually SAID something or evoked any kind of emotional response in me for a long time, so this is especially refreshing. Thank you!
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
Great way of putting it. I like it.
| hey maria chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
I love it, it's so sweet. The title is fitting too.
| windy girl chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
I really like this; it's sweet, but not overbearingly so. Good job.
| DiaRose chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
Hee, that's so cute! I just love it! It made me smile.