|Reviews for Cliche is too cliche|
| CarnivalGirl346 chapter 3 . 5/5/2008
Awesome!Ilove it. update soon
| Naomi Breach chapter 3 . 4/29/2008
thats was cool i think ther was about two mistakes in that so it wasnt really that bad on that end nor on the tehr end actually. i want to know what her ful plan is and then i want to know how its going to pan out thats will be fun _ can wai for the next chapter get writing ok _
| uke-lay chapter 3 . 4/28/2008
lolololololololol great chapter! and great discriptions of the er... dog part. Matts? lollolol...anyways, superb story!
| Riley Hunter chapter 3 . 4/27/2008
I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU! STOP USING THE NAMES OF PEOPLE FROM OUR SCHOOL WITHOUT THEIR CONSENT!
Mr. Barker in a thong...BAD IMAGING!
and why Austin Tyler!
ANYWAYS! Check you email PLEASE. and then you can say that I was totally stupid tomorrow
| adanael chapter 2 . 1/22/2008
veronica, can you please put up the next chapter
| Evangelist J chapter 2 . 1/17/2008
Wonderful story Helen aka Veronica Kimble. I was enjoying the story and you stoped how unfair, but I love the story/chapter. Keep up the updates.
| CarnivalGirl346 chapter 2 . 1/15/2008
Gosh! This is good except for the part where you left me hanging. I can't wait to know why I HAVE to know why. By the way you know me.
| Riley Hunter chapter 2 . 1/11/2008
why did you sign this ronnie? just out of curiousity. god chapter. can't wait for the next!
| Naomi Breach chapter 2 . 1/11/2008
ah cliff hanger what the hell is going to happen to her really i want to know and who was on the phone ah im going to scream by the ond of the day heehee
| CarnivalGirl346 chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
The first 5 lines are good. Maybe you want to write a little more though. Because there is not much to R&R. LOL!
| Riley Hunter chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
don't take this the wrong way but...WHAT THE HELL IS THIS STORY ABOUT? Other than that, good chapter. Luv your stories, as always.
| Naomi Breach chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
i like it you it sound really good you should kkeep writng and dont let any body dont not even your self as for you all you know this may be a big hit and really i will read every bit of it ok