nice rhyming! I am never to good at that! I like how descriptive this is, did a wonderful job of putting the image in my head!

Worded just so it portrays the imagery of the calm before a storm :) Good job, though a little too solemn for a poetic calm scene...but I have to say you used some quite amazing metaphors :) keep writing!

Nice. I'm rather fond of the ocean, and you capture its essence quite well :)

beautiful piece.. the rhyming is great and the descriptions are beautiful.. awesome job