Reviews for Not Even For a Second
perhaps then you'd notice me chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
wow i really liked that...especially the last line - 'but this one's still fresh'. totally a moment where, in less serious circumstances i can imagine someone screaming out 'oh burrn'.

but thats a good thing.

have a happy day!

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Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
Powerful poem and definately angsty. Expressive. I feel it. Write on.