Woah, that was ... simply amazing. I loved every aspect of the story. You really described love, how it is plain and simple, what we wish, what we want. Certain lines in the story just jumped out at me, poetically beautiful. I loved this story.

There were a few, just a few typos. The one that confused me really was this one: And without knowing exactly i it /i , we’re hesitant of believing it exists. I wasn't exactly sure how to interpret the "i it/ i" part. But that's all I really have to say criticism wise.

Great job!

A really nice look at the insecurities of love. Refreshing from a lot of the angst that circulates this section.

As far as I can see, there aren't any major grammatical errors, nothing a little extra read-over won't fix, which can be said about a majority of writers, including myself I'm sure.

I think the part about not being able to control the heart is so true and I really liked the line "You can’t sit idly on the sides anymore and try to change your heartbeat." It's very well put.

Good work and happy writing!