That was adorable!

I really liked this cute story. It left a little unexplained though- why did they kiss in the beginning? So that her friends would see? And also hinted who the old pair were. But I enjoyed it thoroughly. I also enjoyed many of your other ones as well. Awesome! :)

Amazing :)

i like the 2 old ladies, they made me laugh. cute story).

I really enjoyed this. I liked everything about it. It reminds me of a relationship in my life, and it felt very real. Good job! :)

aw this stories so sweet :) x

I loved it, very sweet.

Awesome writing. :)

aw that was really good, there's a whole back story though that never was explained that im curious about but i don't want to be one of those people who asks for more on something the author clearly said was a one shot.

The last sentence makes me smile. I appreciate the irony, two enemies kissing together.

Ah, i like it. It was cute and sweet and really just a page out of a book. I like when pone-shots are like that. When they have little things in the like the "Holiday Barbie" thing and how they were putting on a show. It makes it that much more interesting and gives you a little insight to their backgrounds without ruing the story by getting carried away from the main point.

Love,

Becca

Very good oneshot :)

soo cute !

Interesting

I think it was a bit random, but I do wish that since you revealed his name, you should reveal hers as well. (: It was lovely writing, though, and an awesome oneshot. (: A super addition from woodstock1969 to our c2. (:

Tres cute mi amigo (Yes, mix of languaged, whatev's.) Good job!