Reviews for Originality
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
Interesting. Very much someone trying to be cool and unoriginal on purpose, trying to hip and fresh and interesting. But not quite making it because they're trying to hard and that's what makes them so unoriginal in the first place.
Setsuna529 chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
I really like the contrast between the two people in this poem. My favorite lines: "you just wanted to fit in, / I just wanted to stand out."

"I was too busy taking in the world, / and you were too busy disposing of it"

You have a unique and wonderful style of writing, and I really enjoy your poetry.
pandorka42 chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
I like the idea of putting the concept of originality into a poem like this. I also like the contrast of the narrator and the other person.

Plus, I actually understand what you're trying to tell me in the poem and it doesn't sound like a bunch of jibberish. YAY! XD
Imperia chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
lol, wow. love this poem!