Very nice, I love the way you really captured how you percieved the coast, and how you compared it to Heaven. Very nice.

The entire piece of lovely, and the last line is perfection. I can definitely relate, too. My only criticism is that sometimes you go overboard with your descriptions, but it is always beautiful either way.

-Thanks for the fav. and review :)

I love what you're saying here. I know exactly how that feeling is. The writing is a little awkward at times, but that's to be expected. Good work!