Reviews for State of Mind
Twist Their Emotions chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
I love this. I'm graduating this year and I'm definitely a little scared. This was nice to read.
Honey Nut Loop and m-j chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
That is absolutely wonderful. I know exactly how you feel. I remember leaving school and the fear of unknown responsibility. This is one of the few poems i have found on this site that rhymes without force.

Bravo.
Noellen chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
This has the coolest flow to it in my mind. Awesome

This part, "Of the joy, and of the sorrow,

Of mounting nerves,

Of the vague tomorrow," along with the last lines are my favorite.

on a side note I felt like this last year. /)_(\
staras chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
I like this, most people can't pull off a catalog very well but I think this one's great. The end really pulled it together.

-Amy