Reviews for Hallucination Heaven
Michelladora Moon chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
This is grand. It's really negative, but it's a subtle negativity that works well. :)
Cue B chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
I must say that I love the rhythm your poem provides. It seems as though you're talking about the world being manipulative and secretive and how the idea of heaven is a hallucination that people are willing to hold on to against all logic.

"Fields of heaven suffocate the wanders"

That is my favorite part. Good gob, I love it!
Solstice Of Light chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
Nicely fragmented. It suits the idea.

For somebody that's supposed to be happy, it's quite solidly sorrowful.