This orig. was very lovingly crafted. That the feel I'm getting from it. Like it's a soulstory. The ebb and flow of the words have a cadence to them that makes you want to keep on reading and reading. Very intriguing set up, I'm looking forward to reading the continuation of this orig.

After reading Chapter 3, Chapter 4 hit me like... well, a hammer, pretty much. A hammer that can strike through memories.

Your writing is very vivid and crafted well. :)