Reviews for only ever in her dreams
sparklesparkle chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
The wording really expresses the point on the poem well. I quite like the alliteration in the phrase 'as shiny little sliver', it flows nicely.

The imagery and contrast in the first stanza is great too, the rounded, dullness of the word tumbled and then the harshness of the phrase 'cold dim basement'.

A fantastic piece, very well done.
doctor's diagnosis chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
confusing, but not in a necesarily bad way. very honest, very true.
Tutube chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
Your poem doesn't rhyme. And I love it. You *points* my good sir/madam are awesome. Keep it up.
dress her up in fairytales chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
i like this very much ... and i'm not quite sure why.

maybe i just like the idea of dreaming better than any idea ... ever. like this girl in the poem is reaching out for something ... but something that she could never have. it's beautiful.
the face in the window chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
This was amazing. I can't find the right words to explain how I feel about this. Can relate. A favourite.

fairytale failure chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
Really beautiful imagery. I like the idea of reality as a basement; actually, the first two stanzas were wonderful. I didn't like the rest quite as much, but I understand it and can relate to it. Great poem.