Reviews for Reflection
Compcomplex chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
I'm normally not drawn to these stories but this title grabbed me. The only thing I can mention is the over use of the word "that". Many times this word can be left out and the meaning of the sentence remains the same while creating a crisper read for the reader.
Fyrewyre chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
The scary part of this story is that... I've been there. I managed to stop myself before I got too deep though. Good story.