Reviews for Touched |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing. You are a talented author |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm...interesting...keep it up! This is an awesome story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's so sad! Poor Heather. ( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh! Cliffie. / I shall try to wait patiently. Not that you usually take too long. ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() WRITE MORE! I cant wait for the next chapter. This is a great story. poor Heather tho. |
![]() ![]() ![]() [ Poor Heather... Strong story line, though. Obviously thought through. Just one small thing.. in chap 7, i think the verb you want is trudge not trundle. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. This story continues to be good. ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story. ] It's interesting and fairly well written.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh...poor Heather. ( I really like this plot. I actually had a dream about something similar once...although I guess I'm just rambling now. Anyways, I like it! Update! |