|Reviews for My favorite blue|
| Unknown Survivor chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
Lovely work here. The only thing I would suggest is to make the last word "inner self" or "soul" or something instead of just inner. It sounds like you forgot to to finish that line. But overall..nice job.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
I like this a lot.. the carosuel metaphor was great and I love the crossword simile also.. great piece
| lyl chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
ooh, i really like this... but that last word "inner" should be something else, but, at the moment, i can't think. still, love it! keep up the writing