May-Apryl91 chapter 2 . 4/5/2008
On man! WHo leaves their keys in the car! Good chapter by the way I hope that they can get out.
May-Apryl91 chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
wow! this is like my first time reading this. And wow I like this story so far. Am just at the first chapter and you have my heart racing. Now on to chapter 2
capturechick chapter 10 . 4/4/2008
Man that was a fast update lol. Absolutely love the ending! And Gina and Tom get together it looks like. I would love a sequel with these characters (hint hint)and new danger. I think that would be a fabulous idea don't you think? lol
xx 3DD Fan chapter 10 . 4/3/2008
Wow! This was an amazing story. I loved the ending, as well. You definitely need to write more stories (or maybe even a sequel) asap!
capturechick chapter 9 . 3/31/2008
OMG! I absolutely love this! the countdown on the bomb is absolutely chilling! Looking forward to see how this all ends!
capturechick chapter 8 . 3/6/2008
I was wondering where you went lol! Anyway, just when I think it couldn't get any more suspensful...a bomb? This is really good, update soon!
xx 3DD Fan chapter 8 . 3/5/2008
I'm still loving this story. "Suddenly Jimmy felt something cold against his temple"... very creepy.
capturechick chapter 7 . 1/30/2008
Oh this is so good! Great pace and suspense. Poor girls, so close to the boys finding out where they are. Keep up the great work!
xx 3DD Fan chapter 7 . 1/27/2008
Another great chapter!
capturechick chapter 6 . 1/23/2008
I see you updated this! Wow, this is good. Will the girls ever get free from them? I love how you drugged them so they could sleep, because it's really late at night. Clever!
KatieTheWriter chapter 5 . 1/22/2008
Great suspense and quick paced! It's really interesting and good. Update soon!
xx 3DD Fan chapter 6 . 1/21/2008
More suspense and action... the way I like it. I'll be waiting for more!
capturechick chapter 5 . 1/14/2008
Hi! I just found this story not too long ago. Wow! I luv the suspense! Poor girls is right, now it looks like the boys are in trouble? Please update soon
xx 3DD Fan chapter 5 . 1/13/2008
And just when I thought that they were going to get free! Poor girls! I really love how this story is coming. I'll be looking for more!
ashleyloveskevin09 chapter 3 . 1/4/2008
very good. update soon please
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