Reviews for FATAL EXPOSURE |
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![]() ![]() ![]() On man! WHo leaves their keys in the car! Good chapter by the way I hope that they can get out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! this is like my first time reading this. And wow I like this story so far. Am just at the first chapter and you have my heart racing. Now on to chapter 2 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man that was a fast update lol. Absolutely love the ending! And Gina and Tom get together it looks like. I would love a sequel with these characters (hint hint)and new danger. I think that would be a fabulous idea don't you think? lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! This was an amazing story. I loved the ending, as well. You definitely need to write more stories (or maybe even a sequel) asap! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! I absolutely love this! the countdown on the bomb is absolutely chilling! Looking forward to see how this all ends! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was wondering where you went lol! Anyway, just when I think it couldn't get any more suspensful...a bomb? This is really good, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm still loving this story. "Suddenly Jimmy felt something cold against his temple"... very creepy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this is so good! Great pace and suspense. Poor girls, so close to the boys finding out where they are. Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I see you updated this! Wow, this is good. Will the girls ever get free from them? I love how you drugged them so they could sleep, because it's really late at night. Clever! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great suspense and quick paced! It's really interesting and good. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() More suspense and action... the way I like it. I'll be waiting for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! I just found this story not too long ago. Wow! I luv the suspense! Poor girls is right, now it looks like the boys are in trouble? Please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() And just when I thought that they were going to get free! Poor girls! I really love how this story is coming. I'll be looking for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good. update soon please |