|Reviews for tired|
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
I feel this way right now. Amazing descriptions. Well done. Write on.
| 1st violin 22 chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
That is how I feel right now. It is a good description of tiredness.
| sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
I can see why this might feel unfinished, but I like this piece as it is. It captures a moment in the mind of an individual. I don’t think this needs to be made into something more, though it could be. I suppose it all comes down to what you, the author, intended to write about and if this is what you meant to say.