|Reviews for The World|
| miscellanea chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
That was sweet! Although it was picking on things that are typically critisized with society, you put your twist on it... Especially when you said '(And when they really love someone they have nothing left to give)'. That pretty much said it. I liked this.
| purple x pen chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
again you've written something i have respect for and you've done it in a way that will hopefully make people stop and think, good job.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
very true... great piece.. I like it a lot
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
Very true, and it's even hopeful at the end. Great message, and the rhymes and rhythm felt natural. Good job.