This story was just stupid amounts of adorable, and I absolutely loved it. The characters were diverse and felt unique, the plot was at least partly unique and didn't feel contrived, and the development of love felt natural and real.
You did a really good job :)

This was soooo cute. I just loved it.

This is sweet. Lionel is so cool and I simply love Kayton!

Lovely lovely lovely 333333333333333333333333

so sweet and cute!

I really like this story. I didn't see that many mistakes.

A lovely mix of fairytales. I love it

I love your take on fairytales and supernatural dealings. Your characters are always fun and your writing, humorous. Much enjoyed.

This was a sweet and amazing story I am happy that all of his brothers and sister accept him Kay so amazing he and his brothers and sister were my favorite him.

Sweetness! yes, i love it, and the summary is cool. i can't say much, and... since i've read several reviews of this story, well i just want to let you know that my point is generally the same as them. anon27 in particular. hahaha... XD this version, it makes me smiling at the sweetness, aww. i love the siblings and obviously the pairing. lionel is just the best aww, how their conversation is so funny! also, anon27 point about semi-realistic, yes, i agree, and it's hilarious, the majority reaction i mean... xD i relief it's happy end, and kiss mwahahaha

awwww -i always love a dramatic (happily ever after) ending.

In my opinion i don't see why u need a beta. The work is amazing on its own. I don't know if I was enjoying the story too much, but I didn't spot any mistakes in ur writing.

Such an amazing story. You really are a talanted storyteller. I loved Kay and Lionel together, they had such a cute dynamic between them. Allie was brilliant too, she had me grinning at the screen with her sarcastic wit and blunt personality. Thanks for writing such a great piece of work.

Absolutely loved it! Ingenious :D

So. Freaking. CUTE! EEEEEEEEEEH! I fangirl over your adorable adaption of this fairy tale.

I don't really have much productive to say about this (and I doubt it would matter four years since its publishing), but I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. AAAAUGH. I COULD HUG YOU AND THEN HUG KAY AND LIONEL AND STILL WANT TO HUG YOU AGAIN.

EEEEE!

(And really, I promise, that's all I have to say.)

Love, love, love.

Thanks for the read! Eeeeee!

That was pretty great! I quite enjoyed reading this! It was very fun and entertaining! I hope you keep writing, you're a pretty fantastic author!