This was great, thank you so much for sharing it.

Aw, so sweet! You've got some mad writing skills, i really enjoyed the mild sarcasm and the witty comments as well as some of the funny descriptions of people/places. These kind of remake stories of fairy tales tend to feel and sound hollow because of the plot not coming directly from the author but you managed very well, and even added what i assume is your own personal touch.

Super adorable! Yay!

Aww, this is the cutest! Lionel is such a charming guy. _

Really lovely - the tone is perfect, and wraps it all into an adorable whole.

awesome story!

I love this _

Loved this retelling of FP. My favorite part was the end where Lionel says yes but don't tell your father

XD This is simply adorable! I hope you write more like it. :) Great job! especially with the color description. Are you an artist? because you do an extremely good job of capturing the scenes one would want to paint. :)

E! OMG that was adorable! *_*

I don't know how I didn't see this before but it is just... _ WHEE!

That was adorable! I loved it!

Very cute and sweet, as all fairy tales should be. :)

That was sweet and cute and just lovely.

The: or if they were concluding business together and didn’t want to be overheard; made me laugh.

Oh, that was lovely. It was funny and fun, well developed (I really liked how the fourth son bit kept coming up), and oh! Heh, I really was laughing out loud as I read bits of this. Lionel's proposal and Kay's final response were hilarious and perfect for the situation. Thank you were for writing this!

Oh! Cute! I like Lionel, and Kay’s cute.