"... and I says to my best friend, 'Seriously, try reading it..."

I've apparently decided to become a secret (not so secret anymore now) promotor of your stories at my school. Hope you don't mind.

Anyways, I love this story. Refreshing on your take of the Frog Prince. Personally, I adore it. You pull of making it both good-hearted slash and lovable for rereading. I am a broke freshmen in high school and you've no idea how much happiness you can make my day by allowing me to read fantastic slash without causing me to end up in debt (previous spendings with manga has now ceased because Chinese New Year's money does only come once a year. Thank goodness for free fictionpress).

Once again, awe-spiring, your work, really.

Cobecat, I am officially proud to call myself a fan of your work.

Yours Truly,

Valentine Satiguss

wow, so beautiful! a perfect twist!

very nice!

: )

DH

...wow. i can't believe this story only has four reviews. i really really really x100 like it. love it. *grins really big* kay and lionel are REALLY cool. and i really love darren. i don't know what else i can say besides...yay.

I was telling people about this story at school today, because I couldn't finish it in the morning before I left. I'm so glad it all worked out!

Hee! As cute and funny and totally awsome as usual. _ Kay's being so cool about getting married to a frog amused me to no end, and the siblings were much fun. As was Lionell's tendency to do "embarrassing and attention-attracting" things in public. X3 [loves all over]

...I love your stories... And this is in the top ten.

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*GLOMP*

Marvelous! I love the way you rethought the story and added so many original elements. The freshness of the retelling was phenomenal. Your portrayal of the princess, for example, was absolutely lovely, and the I loved the way you set up the power sharing arrangements between the siblings. I liked the fact that they were intelligent enough to use their disparate talents together for the benefit of the country instead of being jealous of each other and stupidly plotting to steal the throne from each other.

I also liked the fact that Kay thought about the ramifications of accepting the marriage proposal, instead of immediately saying yes. In addition to that, I thoroughly enjoyed the tradition of men dancing together to discuss business. Finally the thought of the 2nd queen running away with the gardener had me cracking up.

If you want, I can beta for you. I used to get A's on my English tests and was advised by my teachers that I had pretty good grammar and spelling skills. Drop me a message if you are interested!