xbelivex chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
love it.
Violet-Madness chapter 8 . 2/19/2010
Love it! Your style is refreshing and nicely fine-tuned. You don't spend too much time describing things and you keep the pace rolling.
i love life chapter 7 . 1/15/2009
this seems interesting...

update soon pls
transitionofthe chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
god im in love with it.i'm speachless(sorry spelling)
Radiant Empire chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
Dude...I like, read the first line, and I liked it. INSTANTLY.

I added you to my favs, because yeah, it is necessary.

I really like this. Awesome. I'm going to continue reading it for sure. Super detailed.
Eve's Deception chapter 7 . 6/9/2008
you write every chapter with the same amount of eloquence and poetry. its simply beautiful.
loudkiwa chapter 7 . 5/16/2008
I really liked it Style is elegant and wording is... very exquisite..? D

Basically, very nice work
Twilight Starr chapter 7 . 5/13/2008
Hmm. I think you mean mouth instead of "wipe it away from his MOTHER". Nice work. I have to feel sorry for poor Brielle. Have an amazing day.

~Twilight Starr~
Okay, well from your AN, I'm thinking you're rushing just a little bit. There are quite a few mistakes in this chapter, so I'd really recommend you slow down...a tad. I'm in LOOVE with this story, just don't forget spellcheck, even if you're on a roll with it.

More as soon as possible! :D

X, Jeweline
darkgurl92 chapter 6 . 5/6/2008
dang..three guys...chasing after her...update soon
FanTASTIC chapter!

Love Gabriel :)

Can't wait for more!

Thanks for the lovely chapter and update soon!

Firedancer-47 chapter 6 . 5/4/2008

I love it so far. I love the way you write and the plot line.

Please keep the chapters coming.

I will be waiting! :]

Great great job
Twilight Starr chapter 6 . 5/4/2008
It sounds like they definitely belong together. Great job!

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr chapter 5 . 5/4/2008
Great addition. Good job on description. Poor Brielle. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
darkgurl92 chapter 5 . 4/26/2008 wonder he kept her locked in the room..

she's the key...update soon...interesting...story.
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