|Reviews for MY WINGS WERE LONG BROKEN|
| xbelivex chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
| Violet-Madness chapter 8 . 2/19/2010
Love it! Your style is refreshing and nicely fine-tuned. You don't spend too much time describing things and you keep the pace rolling.
| i love life chapter 7 . 1/15/2009
this seems interesting...
update soon pls
| transitionofthe chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
god im in love with it.i'm speachless(sorry spelling)
| Radiant Empire chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
Dude...I like, read the first line, and I liked it. INSTANTLY.
I added you to my favs, because yeah, it is necessary.
I really like this. Awesome. I'm going to continue reading it for sure. Super detailed.
| Eve's Deception chapter 7 . 6/9/2008
you write every chapter with the same amount of eloquence and poetry. its simply beautiful.
| loudkiwa chapter 7 . 5/16/2008
I really liked it Style is elegant and wording is... very exquisite..? D
Basically, very nice work
| Twilight Starr chapter 7 . 5/13/2008
Hmm. I think you mean mouth instead of "wipe it away from his MOTHER". Nice work. I have to feel sorry for poor Brielle. Have an amazing day.
| DELETEDELETELDELETEDELETE chapter 7 . 5/13/2008
Okay, well from your AN, I'm thinking you're rushing just a little bit. There are quite a few mistakes in this chapter, so I'd really recommend you slow down...a tad. I'm in LOOVE with this story, just don't forget spellcheck, even if you're on a roll with it.
More as soon as possible! :D
| darkgurl92 chapter 6 . 5/6/2008
dang..three guys...chasing after her...update soon
| DELETEDELETELDELETEDELETE chapter 6 . 5/5/2008
Love Gabriel :)
Can't wait for more!
Thanks for the lovely chapter and update soon!
| Firedancer-47 chapter 6 . 5/4/2008
I love it so far. I love the way you write and the plot line.
Please keep the chapters coming.
I will be waiting! :]
Great great job
| Twilight Starr chapter 6 . 5/4/2008
It sounds like they definitely belong together. Great job!
| Twilight Starr chapter 5 . 5/4/2008
Great addition. Good job on description. Poor Brielle. Nice work.
| darkgurl92 chapter 5 . 4/26/2008
oh..no wonder he kept her locked in the room..
she's the key...update soon...interesting...story.