Great story! She sees people dieing! How terrible. Terrible yet helpful. Your story is beyond what words can express. I really like your writing style.

Please continue the story! A simple request. High school is tough but another chapter would be wonderful.

Admiral

Very nice descriptions, and I, for some reason, liked your poem (?) at the beginning, as well as your first two sentences. The fight was a little sudden, even though it was eventually explained. Overall, it's an interesting start, and I'm looking forward for more!