Reviews for BUBBLES
Oki3xDoki3 chapter 18 . 9/7/2009 are my fucking hero.
Slashmistress Holly chapter 18 . 9/7/2009
OMG I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS *more incoherent rambling*
narcissistic chapter 18 . 9/7/2009
omg hotness! and finally! been waiting forever for this chapter.
Loveless Breath chapter 18 . 9/7/2009
Lol. Does this mean this is complete? pout.
Unrestrained Curiosity chapter 18 . 9/7/2009
LOVE IT! LOVE IT! I DON'T CARE ABOUT THE LATE UPDATE! THIS CHAPTER IS WONDERFUL! THIS IS EXACTLY WHAT I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR! THANK YOU FOR WRITING SUCH AN EXCELLENT CHAPTER! Sorry, I got too excited. But seriously, it was amazing and I enjoyed reading every word of it. And Syl & Dale are adorable, both of them. I wonder what's going to happen next though. Well, hope you update another great chapter like this, no matter how late.
Look Im Sparkling chapter 18 . 9/7/2009
MEOW i loved this chapter :D BWAHAHAHA
erasmuss chapter 18 . 9/7/2009

You havent updated anything in a very, very long time. I was begginign to think you had died.

Then you gift us with bubbly PORN! Kinda...which si great. and :D

I have to say. If anyone said half those things, those insulting things, to me while I was naked, I'd probably throw them out the fornt door, and keep their clothes as compensation. Unless, you know...I aksed for it...but thats different.



Sorry. Bakc to YOUR Syl and Dale. Dude. What a chapter to make a comback with. What was it like writing that? Coz I cnat write first person dirty. It just feels so wrong and bad and not in a good way. T.T

Yopu did it well. I like the way the 'I love you' confession was foleded in amongst insults and general Sylness. Coz you can tell he means it...or, at leats I think he doe...but you can tell he'd be all like 'It was the heat of the moment.' Telling me what your heart meant. The heat of the moment shone in your eweys.

Yeeah. I just quoted asia. Sorry.

Well...this window is spazzing out on this is the end of my uselss reveiw.

I do SO hhope you udate your other shit soon. I do. I do. I do belive in fairys. The kind what Syl and Dale just did. :D



Your lovley, loyal, bitey friend. :D
Clazziquai Project chapter 18 . 9/7/2009
Oh my sweet merciful Jesus. I nearly died when I saw this update...then I REALLY died when I read the chapter.. but in a good way (if that even makes any sense.) This chapter was definitely PASSIONATE. Poor Dale was overwhelmed by Syl's enthusiasm and passion. xD I really hope you continue this story. If you quit, I'm pretty sure me (and many others) will slowly decline from Bubbles withdrawals. You wouldn't want that, would you? w
DefineNightmare chapter 18 . 9/7/2009
This is AWESOME! Seriously, never read lime like this before!

update sooN!
plushdeath chapter 18 . 9/7/2009


bansira chapter 14 . 9/7/2009
Well, I still like Katie. She has attitude, which is good, even if she's acting... pushy. And like a spoiled only-child (no insult to only-childs intended). I seriously wonder about her intentions (or maybe she's just greedy?).

About Champagne... I don't know. Not enough screen time for me to form a proper opinion on her, but I sort of disliked her at her first appearance, and as of now she still didn't have a chance to prove herself... to me, that is. It's all a personal point of view. And why do I keep calling her "she"? xD
Poptart Guava King chapter 18 . 9/7/2009
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH he was so overwhelmed by the moment that he DIDN'T fuck him. roflmfao. its okay that it took so long, the best way to earn forgiveness is the smut chapter that you just gave. lmao... :D
bansira chapter 13 . 9/7/2009
Aw, Dale is adorable. So adorable. xD;

And so is Sabrina (i guess I like all your female characters).

Sabrina reminds me of the girls back in junior high, barely clothed during plain winter. The only difference is that she's smarter (and abuses the "like" every two words). Truthfully, you could make her personality come across just as well by decreasing a bit the "like"'s frequency (don't mind the physics joke). And it wouldn't take the reader that much RAM to process her text.
bansira chapter 12 . 9/7/2009
Oh, Dale is really clueless, but in his case I probably were too. xD;

His sister is funny. The part about minimizing the open windows actually reminded me about myself. Must be instinctive acquired behavior of yaoi fangirls.

Also, I believe Syl is borderline insane. Really. But it's really cute.
bansira chapter 11 . 9/7/2009
I just want to point out that Katie is absolutely awesome. She amuses me to no ends. xD;
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