Reviews for BUBBLES |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Up to this point, I can say that this story has great ideas in it, but it's displayed in a slightly ungraceful way. I know this fic is just for shits and giggles,, but it could be so much better if you polished it a bit. Everythijg feels sort of rushed and choppy. Still going to read though since the characters are great. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bubblewrap is the best. It just so fuffilling when the little circular thing pops! Ahh, bliss. Damn Dale is making progress so slowwww. Wise up, man! Next chapter, WOO! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I actually like Syl. I like him more than Dale anyway. Dale's a little too ditsy. I like how this story is going so far! Ohhh teenage angst. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Silly Syl, dating the exact opposite of Dale. I find it absolutely adorable and disgusting. -excitedly goes to the next chapter- |
![]() ![]() ![]() -snicker- That was a great start. They're so cute. C: |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love bubbles! I love Syl and Dale. this story was awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() How did you make the "TM" ? That's what I'm wondering about, not how you wrote this piece of awesomeness. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Champagne, is that a name? Isn't it like a drink? What a weird dude. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Sabrina read books, that was unexpected. BUBBLEWRAP! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You could so take over the world. 90% are losers, who doesn't know it. 10% are losers, who knows it. Go get 'em! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like Dale, he rules. I tried playing Bubble Buster. It's kinda fun. Shame on you, you got me addÃcted. By the way I lost the game. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story seems nice. It looks quite good. I'm not sure, I understand, is Dale and Syl going to get together or what? I'll just have to read and find out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just finished the whole story and LOVED IT! It was bubbletastic _ Gonna go check out your other stories |
![]() ![]() ![]() KYAA! I LOVE IT! This is such a perfect ending! Thank you so much for writing such an awesome story. You effin' own. :D |
![]() ![]() Oh boy. I can't believe this story is actually OVER! I'm sad because there's no more Syl and Dale but happy because you updated and ARE ACTUALLY ALIVE. I'm gunna miss these boys, and I love how they still haven't really got their shit together haha. Yeah and so... btw it would be really cool if you uh updated some other stuff... *cough* Winter Storms *cough*. Not so subtle hint ;) |