Reviews for BUBBLES
PineappleBoxers chapter 10 . 5/30/2011
Up to this point, I can say that this story has great ideas in it, but it's displayed in a slightly ungraceful way. I know this fic is just for shits and giggles,, but it could be so much better if you polished it a bit. Everythijg feels sort of rushed and choppy. Still going to read though since the characters are great. :D
PineappleBoxers chapter 6 . 5/29/2011
Bubblewrap is the best. It just so fuffilling when the little circular thing pops! Ahh, bliss.

Damn Dale is making progress so slowwww. Wise up, man!

Next chapter, WOO!
PineappleBoxers chapter 3 . 5/29/2011
I actually like Syl. I like him more than Dale anyway. Dale's a little too ditsy. I like how this story is going so far! Ohhh teenage angst.
PineappleBoxers chapter 2 . 5/29/2011
Silly Syl, dating the exact opposite of Dale. I find it absolutely adorable and disgusting. -excitedly goes to the next chapter-
PineappleBoxers chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
-snicker- That was a great start. They're so cute. C:
HelloBilby chapter 20 . 5/29/2011
I love bubbles! I love Syl and Dale. this story was awesome!
Channitut chapter 18 . 5/7/2011
How did you make the "TM" ? That's what I'm wondering about, not how you wrote this piece of awesomeness.
Channitut chapter 10 . 5/3/2011
Champagne, is that a name? Isn't it like a drink? What a weird dude.
Channitut chapter 6 . 5/2/2011
So Sabrina read books, that was unexpected. BUBBLEWRAP!
Channitut chapter 4 . 5/2/2011
You could so take over the world. 90% are losers, who doesn't know it. 10% are losers, who knows it. Go get 'em!
Channitut chapter 3 . 5/2/2011
I like Dale, he rules. I tried playing Bubble Buster. It's kinda fun. Shame on you, you got me addícted. By the way I lost the game.
Channitut chapter 2 . 5/2/2011
This story seems nice. It looks quite good. I'm not sure, I understand, is Dale and Syl going to get together or what? I'll just have to read and find out.
00000000000000000000000000000 chapter 20 . 3/17/2011
Just finished the whole story and LOVED IT! It was bubbletastic _ Gonna go check out your other stories
Wicked Neko chapter 20 . 3/16/2011
KYAA! I LOVE IT!

This is such a perfect ending!

Thank you so much for writing such an awesome story.

You effin' own.

:D
Sarah chapter 20 . 3/6/2011
Oh boy. I can't believe this story is actually OVER! I'm sad because there's no more Syl and Dale but happy because you updated and ARE ACTUALLY ALIVE. I'm gunna miss these boys, and I love how they still haven't really got their shit together haha.

Yeah and so... btw it would be really cool if you uh updated some other stuff... *cough* Winter Storms *cough*.

Not so subtle hint ;)
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