Wow...

I think that about 15% of those words were 'like.' It made me cringe a bit. But Sabrina definitely constitutes as...different. She's interesting. But perhaps she'll learn to do without the likes. (shrug).

I wonder what Syl's gonna get him...

Could be anything really. Is he gonna be pervy or sweet? Seems almost like a 50/50 shot to me. Haha. Please update soon. Great job on this chapter.

I reviewed as quickly as possible and can't wait for the next update!

Sabrina really does say 'like' to much. Still, she turned into an okay kind of person. I kinda like her now. And she's gonna get the two of them together...(hopefully)

xx

Great story! I really like the characters and the plotline. Please update soon.

Gr! That girl is driving me insane, too many 'like's in there. I nearly cried from the agony of it all, sorry, I still liked the chapter though. _Update really soon, pretty please... hehehe.

Now I review chapter 4 because going backwards is in.

YOU MENTIONED ME IN YOUR TOP A/N! Holy gods! You make me sound like, like, like SOMEONE BIG AND WORTH WORSHIPPING! Which I'm NOT so I was reading it going OH MY GOD, MY EGO JUST EXPLODED AND MAKE ME SNEEZE OUT A LUNG. I blushed so hard and grinned like watermelon peel. :D

So, THANK -YOU- for writing such a brilliantly entertaining story. Ah-hah Syl and Dale (starry eyes) :)

Zomg YES! I'M GOING TO TRAVEL ALL THE WAY TO...(searches for a hint of where abouts you might live) ENGLAND! BRITAIN! And have some KINKY ICE CREAM EATING SESSIONS WITH HOT CHOCOLATE SAUCE AND RAINBOW SPRINKLES AND WE'LL EAT IT OFF EACH OTHER WITH GARDEN SPADES and other stuff...

Hee, bubblesexual. So adorabubble wubble XD

Oh oh and when Syl slides his finger down Dales cheek...SEXUAL TENSION OR WHAT. The NEED boys. Feel and bask and feast on the NEED (for each others young and supple naked bodies)

Yes, I love Syl and Dale. Oh oh and Sabrina (the teenage witch not so bitch). Looking forward to the next chapter loverlips!

YOU UPDATE TOO FAST LITTLE GIRL! I DIDN'T EVEN HAVE A CHANCE TO READ LET ALONE REVIEW CH 4 BEFORE LO AND BEHOLD! CHAPTER FIVE IS OUT! and I scream WAZZAH! EVEN MORE REWARDS? ARE YOU TRYING TO MAKE ME DIE FROM HAPPINESS AND VULGAR JOY-STRIPPING?

Bwahahahha. SABRINA! Despite her horrible way of speaking, I love her. But not as much as Syl. Nehehehe, Syl the love of my textual life. Syl makes Dale sound so deliciously CUTE. Like, like, like, swimming in a bathtub full of warm milk and eating cream from a cat saucer cute. (What a retarded description. I shame English)

HEATH LEDGER AS A GAY, GEEK-FREAK. Oh god, oh god, The Joker-r-r-r-r-r-r (heart combusts). Christian Bale is oh so sexy too. Batman and The Joker SO SHOULD GET IT ON. Robin can come in for the occasional threesome or so. OR maybe be the camera boy or the like :)

UPDATE SOON! That cliffhanger sucked like lollipops. :D

Amay-ZING. That was absolutely, positively, AMAY-ZING, baby. And I don't count the Bubblesexuals either. They're just an added bonus to all your awesome-awesomeness. D: Either way though, these chapters have been fairly decent. Okay, scratch that, they're great (understatement of the whole damned century)! So. So. Yeah. I like it a lot. So I'll just have to tell you I dislike a lot of stuff.

Like, like. Dale's obvious obliviousnessness. That is just so frustrating. I mean, I thought it'd be pretty obvious that Kyl-Syl, whatever, wants in on his pants. But no. No pant-grabbing, or jaw-dropping scenes. Yeah. So I was pretty disappointed by Dale's naivete. I like his pigtails in chapter 3 though. Totally worth imagining, har har. Reminds me of a friend of mine: he's just soo femi9. I like to spell feminine that way. 'Cos I usually say effemin8. Weird, I know.

So, about Kyl-Syl (GOD, what is wrong with my memory on this?), he is such a dick. Like, major prick-dick. I don't have many penicular synonyms, but I'd like to say that Syl should really get that head out of his ass (and that stick too). It's clogging up his mental status up in his brain area, which is, to be frank, quite disturbing slash sad.

:[ I feel unsexified now: I discovered a new word to add to my ever-expanding dictionary: bubblesexual. LOVEIT. HA!

I cannot begin to say how marvelously entertaining this was. :D Random, yes. Of no intellectual use to anyone, certainly. Being of the kind of story that makes Carmen super-happy-freaky-giddy, HELL YES.

Just like everyone else, I love Dale. XD He's my dream guy, lol. I'm totally serious too. I love his and Syl's conversations, they're crude, but entirely boyish and natural. I giggled like mad at every single chapter so far. Can't wait to see more.

Also, if ever I come to live in Britain (doubt it), I'd like to join the Loser's League of Britain. :D Losers for the win!

Awesome story

Amazing! Syl's still a jerk. What a terd.

Go Dale! BURN! Hehe, thats what you get for the bubblesexual jokes! (Which were hysterical, by the way.)

You know, at the part where it says, "and his finger touches the collar of my shirt and he tears it away from me," I glanced at it, and at first I thought it said, "and his finger touches the collar of my shirt and tears it off," and I'm just like, "OH SNAP, HOW DARE HE, AND RIGHT AFTER EMBARRASSING DALE IN CLASS!" Then I read it again and I'm just like, "Oh."

Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter...

Hey, I thought that after I finished reading what you wrote of Winter Storms I'd check out your other work. Nice story so far, not as good as Winter Storms though, sorry, seriously though I can't wait for you to update both of the stories. PS: I don't like Syl very muchly_

Oh, dear, Dale is so oblivious but yet adorable. And Syl is a bit of a tool, you're right. Anyhow, being a loser rocks. It's a way of life, damn it. (:

Please update soon, I really like this story!

I love this story. :)

i hate you, syl, you're so cold!