I absolutely love how you capture her emotions. Casey Hallway sounds just like the typical teen caught up in typical emotions, but the way you write, it sounds original and special. Thanks for writing!

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Oh I love it! It makes me so nostalgic. I remember all of those angsty feelings from being a teenager. I love the allusion to Romeo and Juliet. I like that you took the theme and made it new and current and rellevant and oh so powerful. I want to read the rest! You should finish the story! Please?

aw this was so cute! i loved it )

This is really good! Really well written, good job

O.o oh! interesting!

Beautifully written, I kind of like this slight basis on Romeo and Juliet. The character's inner turmoil is shown very well, and this was an excellent addition from woodstock1969 to our c2. (:

ah interesting..kept me kind of glued right from the start-though i knew what was gonna happen..lol. your style writing is quite good, keeps me kinda interested to read more. just a slight mistake towards the end.

You wrote, "Why you kiss me?". But i think it was supposed to be "Why did you kiss me?". Well at least i think so other than that, it was definitely well done, considering the fact that you wrote this in less than an hour! :D keep up the great work!

Woah... *is speechless* I love your style of writing. I also like how you never really explained the main character or even Kale. It was nice and sweet. Just like that!

Great work, keep it up!