Reviews for Umbrella
Britani- Friend of the Bears chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
This one is not quite your normal writing style, but is beautiful nonetheless.

The bubbles match you darling!

Kiss kiss.

Solstice Of Light chapter 1 . 12/22/2007
Twee. Quaint.

Sometimes there could be better use of the new lines, since it doesn't rhyme anyway.

smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 12/21/2007
interesting. although i wish you wouldn't have mentioned that song...ugh, stupid pop music. but that's just my opinion.

your poem was nice but now i am thinking of that stupid pop song...try not to give away to your audience what it will be about. people will judge it before they read it. just a suggestion.

but nice job. keep writing. )
lymli chapter 1 . 12/21/2007
I think it's a cute poem, the last lines are good, I mean, it's as if you have a lot of confidence in who you love.