Reviews for hammers and rusted nails
Yellow Duvet chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
Huh, this was really different but interesting all the same. I really liked this, great job. :D
by His blood chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
this is so annoying - fp still hasn't fixed my profile! i mean, honestly. i might have to create a profile and put it on my other account and switch e-mails ...

i feel somewhat better. i just started freaking out initially but i'm a bit calmer ... it's just, my goodness, you should see the craziness on there. i got a message like, 'stop posting your Jesus s**t everywhere, not everyone wants to see it,' i'm preachy, i'm a forum troll, i mean, all i wanted was to help people. aah. and it's like, i am toning it down a bit ... i'm NOT going to hide my faith, it's extremely obvious on there that i'm Christian, it's not that i think i'm going to give advice first and THEN add a note saying 'if you're Christian or would like Christian advice, etc message me and we can talk' instead of being in your face.. i don't know what i should do, i mean i'm not going to be silent and all of a sudden hide my faith, no, not gonna happen. ever. but at the same time, i don't want to offend people and i was posting religious advice in topics where there was no mention of their faith .. but at the same time there are people who have responded to it when i took that risk and who i've been able to help through God's strength so it's like, i'm so torn. some people are pretty vicious, gosh, all i wanted was to help people ...

but i am learning from this. definitely. and i only have about 10 minutes left online, but i do feel a lot better, so i'll be fine. thank you so much for responding and helping me, i honestly feel a lot calmer. and this is insane, why is my profile not fixed, i don't want to have to e-mail fp AGAIN.

sigh. oh well. i have a lot of thinking to do tonight. but in a way, i think this was a good thing ... when something like this happens, good always comes out of it. so ... i feel a lot better.

thank you again.

in the peace and love of Christ,

alison xx

ps. this is gorgeous beyond words. definitely a favorite.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
powerful piece.. wonderful formatting
Sweet Madeline chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
Oh. My. Goodness. This was incredible! I didn't even know what this was about until I got to the line "piercing an innocent man's wrists", then I knew. Wow. This is so powerful. The words are enough without having to be bolded/italicized, not that I'm complaining... wow. Don't know what else to say. Such a bold and raw poem, proclaiming what you believe very eloquently.
Militant Poet chapter 1 . 12/25/2007
wow, a very beautiful poem
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
Very nicely done C. After writing this I reslly think that you should see "The Passion of the Christ", It has this same sort of thing (Well duh, the crucifiction) *Sorry I can't spell* Nice Job C. ~S.S.
tired-for-days chapter 1 . 12/21/2007

i love this. keep up the good work.
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 12/21/2007
beautiful poem. I adore it. It's so good, and so true. Amazing work. Keep it up.