Reviews for Ragtag
mmmmmmmm chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
I like the beginning of this one for all the musical references. the whole thing feels very pretty and smooth, but with an undercurrent of sadness, if that makes any sense?

but I don't think the second stanza makes sense. maybe the word "in" in the second line was supposed to be "is"?

otherwise, very pretty poem, I enjoyed it a lot. keep writing! :]
sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 12/23/2007
I really enjoyed reading this piece. The diction and images are excellent and you evoke some really poignant emotions in this poem, too. The last stanza is perfect, in my opinion. I love the idea you express there. Keep up the great work!