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i like how you had the disrepancies between the two ex's.

i don't think cregan's all too bad of a person? but going by the current boyfriend he has he's defintely a JERK

and GREG YOU ARE HOT (hotter than your little bro. XD)

:) :) :):)

greg's getting turned on now :) :) :):):)

:) :) :) :) :) ):):)

please, please, please, please, please update : :) :) :) :)

I LVOE THIS STORY

usually i don't like oc, esp. if they're vamps/fantasy/magical power ppl in love BUT I LOVE GREG HE IS AMAZING AND HAS CHARACTER I LOVE LUCE AND EVERY SINGE PERSON IN YOUR FICS :) :) :) :) :)

AND OMG YOU CANNOT LEAVE US STUCK THERE WITH THE BLOOD CRYSTALS XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD

Greg in the early chapters reminds me of the song the day i lost my voice by copeland. anyway this story is awesome please update soon!

Despite what could possibly be a rather cliche plot (a powerful and lonely vampire falls in love) this story is far from cliche (except for the puns but that's what makes them so hilarious). The way you take fairy tales and turn them into inside jokes just makes the story so funny (or should I say punny). Sometimes the plot is a little predictable but all of the characters are so endearing (except for the villains of course) especially orphans and the relationship between the oblivious Greg and lovable Luce. The only thing that upsets me is that you haven't updated in so long. Please don't give up on such an adorable story! I eagerly await the next chapter D

I love this story, it is an absolute joy! I really like the monsters in it, it makes the story unique and great

this story is SO amazing! It completely inspired me to write... You should definetly publish it!

hey i like the idea of greg and luce alot, but i wish i could go back in time and not read this story lol. however, irritating and annoying romance aside, there were some parts that just made me burst out laughing and had my mom wondering if i was going crazy. u have a gift for humour which i am thoroughly enjoying.

Hellmark! God I love this story. Go Greg, you get your man.

Wow. This is one of the best, most enjoyable stories i've read in a long time! The puns! The PUNS! Amazingly funny. Please update soon it would make me oh-so-happy.

Your story is just too cute, I love ur characters and the baby halflings Especially Emma. Please please update and dont give up on this story, i would just be incredibly depressed about not knowing wat happens at the end that i would find ways to make my dog equally miserable." not a good idea

This... is most definitely one of the most amazing stories I have read on this site.

I love your characters, and how they all interact together.

I can't wait for more!

Please update again soon D

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OMG! Why haven't you updated? DX Update! Please!

This is the most brilliant thing I have read ever. I love it.