Reviews for Sourpuss
CkQ chapter 1 . 7/4/2020
I know this is 2020, and you wrote this in 2007, and that you probably won't see this anyway. But I adore this story and more than that, your writing style in here. It's ridiculous and whimsical and just all-around wonderful. Thank you for sharing this piece.
And if you somehow get to read this, I hope that this message finds you in happiness, health and safety. I am very grateful for your works and I wish you success in all your endeavours. :)
petrisha.naidoo chapter 1 . 5/30/2015
Loved it , a very sweet yet interesting story I do hope you continue it ..would love to know what's gonna happen next . The make a cute couple and their not that much different . Riley cares for lemon and his little gestures make all the difference .
Ishotthealbatross chapter 1 . 1/28/2015
aww that was a pretty cute story :-)
Desi Dangers chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
I really loved this, wish there was more but what is here is really cute and funny. :D
fallenidols chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
One word: brilliant.

I especially loved the line, '"I thought you'd make the perfect Mrs. Winterfields."', so Lemon's bottom, eh?
LRRH-708 chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
Sooooo. . . this is gonna be continued. Right? Because I will give you my heart if you do keep writing this 3 see there it is
Pixie611 chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
I dunno what too say.. Awesomee?
Jaded Devil chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
Haha I love this story! It's very cute, and I like Lemon's name as well.
hi chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
its actually a good serious story with a lot of dry humor...I like it
Drizzle chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
i haven't read the story yet, but your summary made me lol so hard that i had to send in a review asap.
Annie chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
Heh heh heh... This one made me snicker a lot. I don't really know who to snicker at more-Riley or Lemon-but despite my dilemma, the story was wonderful.
frogs of war chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
Very silly. You almost might think that Lemon didn't like Riley, but you would be oh, so wrong.
Cattails chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
Haha! That was adorable! I can understand his strong love for his cat...and Riley doesn't seem TOO bad :P Looks like everyone won
Satan's Angelic Mistress chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
Your writing style is awesome, but there's a lot of tense confusion and just shoddy grammar in general. On the bright side, at least its decipherable. Still, do try and be more careful, yeah? 'Cus really you can do so much better. [
Logical and serene megadeath chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
We're going to KFC with the big chicken.

I love this thank you for the joy.
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