|Reviews for So Icarus Fell|
| Harmonic Discord chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
Wow. I really liked this piece. It was told beautifully, particularly the beginning. I wasn't expecting it to end that way at all, but it fit in a tragically ironic kind of way...
My one criticism - and it's not a criticism, really - is that I was expecting the name Cassandra to also have some significance - well, she wasn't able to escape the tragedy of Icarus dying, so perhaps that was its significance?
Minor points -
She wanted to touch it, know it, know him…but she couldn’t hand around long enough to wonder about his life story. - "hand" should be "hang"?
“I had a twin brother one,” he began. - "once"
The sun had set, the waves beneath us crashed, ebbed and crashed again. - "them"
| Sir Scott chapter 1 . 12/23/2007
That was a different. It was kind of sad for Christmas, but Christmas is pretty sad anyway.