|Reviews for freeze tag|
| ilovetheopera chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
this is beautifully moving. i love the last two lines.
| mezzie chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
the things we try to catch and keep..
| Doxology chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
It was so...touching. It really was. "completely setting us aglow." that was my favorite thing.
peace and love
~ h.p. warble
| The Sleep Of Reason chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
It's gorgeous and I love it. Keep writing for my sake! Lol
| meus carus chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
"I wish I could put a paperclip on my dreams,
so the wind wouldn't blow them away." - very nice.
| Aomera chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
Beautiful piece. Love the last 2 lines especially:
'baby, we’re shining brighter than the stars.
i wish i could put a paperclip on my dreams,
so the wind wouldn’t blow them away.'
The paperclip thing is perfect, very clever. well done Ax