Reviews for freeze tag
ilovetheopera chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
this is beautifully moving. i love the last two lines.
mezzie chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
the things we try to catch and keep..

-mezzie
Doxology chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
aw...

It was so...touching. It really was. "completely setting us aglow." that was my favorite thing.

great job.

peace and love

h.p. warble
The Sleep Of Reason chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
It's gorgeous and I love it. Keep writing for my sake! Lol
meus carus chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
"I wish I could put a paperclip on my dreams,

so the wind wouldn't blow them away." - very nice.
Aomera chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
Beautiful piece. Love the last 2 lines especially:

'baby, we’re shining brighter than the stars.

i wish i could put a paperclip on my dreams,

so the wind wouldn’t blow them away.'

The paperclip thing is perfect, very clever. well done Ax