|Reviews for All our firsts|
| Chakara1winxclub chapter 1 . 9/20/2013
I can't express what I feel right now with mere words. Your story is so full of love not and trust I've never thought about the song 'beautiful soul' in this way. Right now, I've found a new respect for that song. You know, you are one imaginative person. I can't think of anyone else thinking in this way about this song, not even Jesse McCartney. This story proves how much of a good heart you have. Thank you for sharing it with us.
And in your story 'Never the Bride', you wrote a sentence at last,
If you wait long enough, if you look hard enough, you will get your cliche one day...
Do you really believe in that? Cuz, not to be offensive, but there are some girls, who can't believe in all these. Not because they won't, but they can't due to their physical appearances. But that's okay, I hope at least some girls get their fairy tale ending, don't care if they deserve it or not. SOMEBODY has to get it, right?
I'm truly sorry if you feel like this was a waste of time, but I just HAD to write this...
| DDDD chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
This was good! I loved this very much, awseome!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
| 64ShatteredButterflys chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
I loved this story but it was so sad and awesome at the same time!
| Elyssa Morales chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
I like it, but one question...isn't he engaged?
| impossibly-infinite chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
Nice oneshot! :)
| R. Tist chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
It could use a bit of work, what with some of the slightly overused lines. It's just that the story had sort of an angsty twang to it, and you not emphasizing that even by just a bit makes the story a little too cliche and predictable. But it is nonetheless adorable and just plain sweet. :))
| Summerove chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
i love this soo much...u should know how much considering the fact that i took the time out to review...u have talent :)
| Rooffoo chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
I loved it. Simple as that. I loved it.
| sandcastlesinthesand chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
so freaking cute!
| WrittenInTheSand chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
I love this! It's absolutely beautiful.
I read a similiar story on Fanfiction but it had...scenes in it. I should really learn how to read the ratings on stories.
Anyway, I really loved this and Beautiful Soul went with it perfectlt, especially at the somehow, I can't help but wonder why you didn't just make it a full story instead of a one-shot, but nonetheless, I enjoyed it.
Keep on writing!
| AngelsXDevils chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
This always makes me cry! :(
Such a short and sweet story!
I love reading this over and over and it never gets old for me!
| PurpI3.14 chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
| tall chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
I'm not one for squealing - okay I am. This was so adorable! Especially the climax )
| AlijaS117 chapter 1 . 7/5/2009