Reviews for Call it Love
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
I love the rhyme in this. The way you make it both internal and external gives it a strong rhythm, and also a bit of a punch behind the words.

I also like your use of parentheses. By contrasting the style of them, you really make them feel like afterthoughts.

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fatbird33 chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
i liked the things in parentheses. good technique.